All of my “shoulds” are what gives my body tone, Than why, you might ask, don’t I have a sick set of abs? because my tone is that of a resister, a pare of opponents at war. Every time I want to step forward, to stand apart, my body says I should stand down. but,Continue reading “Ahoy, Be ‘Ware”
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Mark ‘Er Up!
She read a line, a metaphor referencing Shania, meant to signify my state of mind at that time of life. I expressed that to my reader, still having to admit that the tone that came across when SHE read it didn’t fit my intended message. When I had done a verbal edit I knew where I stand, and the exact meaning I was trying to convey. Although I have a fair command over the English language, I also tend to use words as a poet first…..
